For the Criminally Inane

For the Criminally Inane

Thursday, April 23, 2009

Chapter one rewrite

Well, I re-wrote the and rearranged the first chapter and I think it's getting better but it might still have too much exposition in the beginning. Hard to get the delicate balance. Read the "First Five Pages" by Noah Lukeman and it had some good ideas.

Read also, Write Away by Elizabeth George and that had some interesting insights.

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